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I really hope you will not give up on this. I don't think you have offended or disappointed us. I still want the tube and will buy it wherever you post it, but i hope you will continue working on it and give it your best shot. You are the artist, you'll know when it's finished. I should have said this before, and am so sad that i did not and am glad that maxsilverhammer did: thank you for offering this to us, and please keep working on her. We are only suggesting/giving ideas. Don't give up, good luck, and thank you for persisting...oh! I like her lips! Her face is lovely!

I actually like her - she has a timid,shy fragile way about her. But have to agree that her breasts seems off,baggy almost for a portrait of a young woman.

Don't give up on her Rivus Dea. =)

Thank you for you opinion! But I want to say that I don't know, may I finishing this project. Many people, that shipped in this tube don't like it now, in colour. So, when I give them this tube, they will be sad:( That is very bed, that people can't give their money, when they don't like the tube in progress...So many different opinions here is...I don't know what to do. So I decide to finish this work and download this tube into main catalog PSP.com where everybody can decide themselves download or no. Please sorry! I hope another tube that I will do, will be more lucky and interesting...

Please don't be scared. The taggers (customers) are here to support you and share their ideas.
I personally think that a layer of clothing would be wonderful! (Maybe some jewelry layers too) That would probably make even more people happy (so both options would be available), but of course the artist always has the final decision.
Perhaps a few shades of skin color layers could be added as well. Some lighter, some darker. A slight up-curl at the edge of her mouth might make her look a little happier if some people believe she looks scared.
It doesn't matter to me either way. These are just suggestions. I've already invested (chipped in).
But in general my opinion for tubes is "the more layers there are to work with, the better and useful the tube will be."
As a tagger, I almost always invest more money in the tubes with the most layers (options).
As always, thanks for reading and I wish you the best of luck. :)

I agree that something has changed since adding the color; i also liked her better as a sketch and hope that that sketch will be part of what is offered with the finished and it DID capture the beautiful african american in her that this somehow does not. Also, she doesn't HAVE to be naked. You are an artist; do your artist thing and make her look real again. You can do it!

My dear friends, I am new here, and I really scared, if I do something wrong! Thank you for understanding! Thanks for your kind and help, it's very important for me. By the way, I am a professional child book illustrator, and naked girls it's a new thing for me. But I want to learn, and I need in your comments and critics. I know that I not very bad painter, and hope I can do this and others work good...
And please forgive me my pure language, my school was not good, and I do a many mistakes... (

Thank you so much for taking the time to reply back. I appreciate it:) Just go back to Black & white & stick w/ that & just work on the coloring. In the black & white her features looked softer & beautiful, not so harsh as in your updated version. I know you are doing your best & I can't wait to see what the end result will be:) Have a great day!

Shee looks scared, poor thing, maybe because you gave her such a colour? LOL Maybe she found the skin-colour in a tube, all by herself when you didn't look, Rivus Dea. Just kidding. I know she will be beautiful in the end!

Yes, you have right. I don't like her too. But I didn't know what happened. Thank you for comment. Now this tube in progress, so I will try to do her more beaty. Don't worry please , I heard you. And I will try to do something. It's my first picture of not white skin woman, so I will learn.
Thank you!

I'm sorry the black & white looked so good & hopeful. Now it's not looking too good, something about her eyes & mouth don't look right. Her eyes need a dark brown layer & perhaps a deep hazel color. That color is creepy.. The skin tone is off too, also her breast look off. Not trying to be harsh. It's just that there aren't very many African American tubes out there & the beautiful ones are few & far between. So when I see a work in progress, I get excited & hope it comes out great.